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What ever happened to us?
Best of friends.
Better than friends.
Carefree. Happy.
Where did that go?
Our connection shone with a light.
A neverending light.
Then I sank.
I sank into sorrow.
Into hatred.
Into loneliness.
We drifted.
The light dimmed.
I sank deeper.
Now the light is gone.
Gone from me.
Gone from you.
I have risen now.
I have returned.
My rotting shell was born anew.
My sour soul was born anew.
I am reborn.
I am a new person.
What of you?
You have changed.
I've noticed it.
Others have noticed it.
You are colder.
Emptier.
There is a void within you.
Empty. Deep. Gaping.
We are different, you and I.
Let us start anew.
Let our friendship be reborn.
©2006-2009 ~Fadeslayer
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Another poem for Meredith. Hope you peeps enjoy it!:D
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wow...me likes...it would have been cool if you'd added to the end

"Let us start anew.
Let our friendship be reborn,
Anew..."

Just makes it sound a bit...never ending to perpetuate the sense of rebirth and new, frsh beginings :shrug:

good work :D

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Narien.
Ooh. You have a real eye for poetry, Em!!:D Thanks!!! :hug:

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There is a time of apprehension which begins with the beginning of darkness, and to which only the speech of love can lend security.
:heart: Jill [link] :heart:
nah i don;t
it's just gut instinct

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Narien.
*shrugs* whatever. Still good advice. check your mail.

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There is a time of apprehension which begins with the beginning of darkness, and to which only the speech of love can lend security.
:heart: Jill [link] :heart:
Thanks...i don't want to totally rip anyone's work apart...cause it's personal stuff and a form of expression..there is no right and wrong :D but it's not like art where you can say something is definately wrong :D

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Narien.
*nods* Damn straight!!!:D

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There is a time of apprehension which begins with the beginning of darkness, and to which only the speech of love can lend security.
:heart: Jill [link] :heart:

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